tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-126857860665035872024-03-08T03:45:08.566-08:00Heidi Fielden's English 326 BlogHeidi Fieldenhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/14965062102357716854noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-12685786066503587.post-59154130679177073422013-11-09T21:10:00.001-08:002013-11-09T21:10:18.660-08:00Blog 12 (Extra Credit)
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HAVING HAD NO IDEA WHAT THIS NOVEL WAS ABOUT, I did not have
any expectations when I began reading it <span style="color: red;">(POW 6, past
participial phrase not part of main verb). </span>After reading this book, I would recommend it to
readers of any age. <i>The Fault in our Stars</i>, A BEAUTIFULLY
CRAFTED NOVEL, takes the reader on an emotional journey <span style="color: red;">(POW 1, appositive set off by commas). </span>Hazel and Augustus— TWO YOUNG CANCER PATIENTS—
represent the ultimate love story. <span style="color: red;">(POW 3, appositive
set off by dashes). </span>John
Green does an excellent job of capturing the balance between the frustrations
of cancer and the bliss of young love. Hazel, WITTY, STRONG, AND INQUISITIVE, is one of the
most lovable characters I have ever encountered in any novel <span style="color: red;">(POW 7, adjectives out-of-order). </span>After all that she
has gone through, the reader wonders:
HOW CAN ANYBODY SURVIVE THROUGH ALL OF THIS? <span style="color: red;">(POW
9, rhetorical question). </span>Once
the reader begins to understand her, Hazel is an extremely selfless character. Initially, she would rather ignore her
only chance at love THAN risk hurting Augustus when she dies <span style="color: red;">(POW 11, use of <i>than</i>). </span>IGNORING THIS IDEA, Hazel allows
herself to fall in love with Augustus and experience something she thought she
never thought she would find: TRUE LOVE <span style="color: red;">(POW 5, present
participle phrase not part of main verb & POW 4, appositive set off by
colon). </span>I think that
readers of all ages will find Green’s novel to be captivating and
engaging. The narrator (HAZEL) is
relatable, funny, and honest with the reader <span style="color: red;">(POW 2,
appositive set off by parenthesis). </span>If you are looking for a novel that
will inspire you, THEN <i>The Fault in our
Stars</i> is an excellent choice <span style="color: red;">(POW 10, use of <i>then</i>).</span> Through the characters of Hazel,
Augustus, and Isaac, Green depicts the true struggles of cancer patients and
those that survive them—A TRULY EXCELLENT WORK OF FICTION <span style="color: red;">(POW 8, dash to emphasize the last element of a sentence).<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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I do not have any piece of writing that I want to use for
this week. Nor do I have something
specific that I want to write about for this week. I am going home this weekend AND surprising my parents AND
surprising my little sister <span style="color: red;">(POW 2, simple sentence
with compound verbs connected with <i>ands</i>).
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little sister and dad and THEN surprise my mom, but I decided to keep it a
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Being a horrible liar, I tend to have a hard time keeping
things from people—especially my mom—so who knows if my grand plan will even
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I love going home for the weekend because it is so relaxing
and stress-free; HOWEVER, I never seem to get much done when I go back there <span style="color: red;">(POW 1, use of <i>however</i>
correctly).</span> I would rather
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house with my family <span style="color: red;">(POW 6, use of <i>than</i>).</span> I blame my dogs <span style="color: red;">(POW 7, long sentence
and short sentence after). </span>Whenever
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This weekend will be full of quality family time,
relaxation, home cooked meals—and hopefully a little productivity <span style="color: red;">(POW 3, Dash to emphasize last element of a sentence). </span> What are you doing this weekend? <span style="color: red;">(POW 5, real question).</span></div>
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<span style="font-family: "Times New Roman";">Mellie,
A QUIET FRESHMAN GIRL, is a powerful character that many young adults can learn
from <span style="color: red;">(POW 1, appositive set off by commas).</span> After being raped by a fellow student,
Mellie becomes introverted and withdraws herself from everybody around
her. Though there are attempts by
a few people (HEATHER, MR. FREEMAN, AND IVY) to reach out to her, Mellie
continues to shut herself down from the world around her <span style="color: red;">(POW 2, appositives set off by parenthesis). </span>Melinda goes through the motions
of everyday life, but she does not talk or interact with people. Her life—A MESS OF SADNESS AND
LONLINESS—no longer seems important to her <span style="color: red;">(POW 3,
appositives set off by dashes). </span>The
reader is able to see how depressed Melinda is after she was raped <span style="color: red;">(POW 5, participial phrase). </span>Though nobody knows of
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THE INEXCUSABLE SEXUAL ASSAULT <span style="color: red;">(POW 4, appositives set
off by colon). </span><i>Speak</i>, POWERFUL, CAPTIVATING, AND
EMPOWERING, should be taught in high school classrooms around the United States
<span style="color: red;">(POW 6, adjectives out-of-order).</span><o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<i>Speak</i>
by Laurie Halse Anderson is a great novel to be taught in a young adult
classroom. The novel explores
issues that many teenagers face in their middle and high school years. Mellie is a complex character with many
personal struggles and difficulties.
BECAUSE she was raped by Andy, she called the police at a party which
resulted in the loss of her friends <span style="color: red;">[POW 2, start a
sentence with a “because” clause].</span>
Mellie suffers through her freshmen year alone and with a dark
secret. She does not open up to
her closest friends who now shun her.
NOR does she tell her parents what happened to her at that party <span style="color: red;">[POW 1, start a sentence with ‘”nor”].</span> Mellie also faces challenges with her
schoolwork, family, relationships, and fitting in. As her freshmen year begins, she becomes more detached from
her those around her, and even from herself. She falls into such a slump that she is unable to find any
happiness at all. She was provided
with the opportunity to play basketball and be part of a team. However, because Mellie did not
participate in her classes she had very bad grades; because her grades were
bad, she was unable to play on the basketball team. <span style="color: red;">[POW
6, use of semicolon to mirror sentences].</span> Mellie becomes detached from the world around her, THOUGH
she still is very aware of people making fun of her <span style="color: red;">[POW
4, use of “though” to interrupt main sentence]. </span>The only person who seems to be somewhat of a mentor
to Mellie is Mr. Freeman. He
encourages her in class, believes in her artistic talent, and offers a
listening ear and compassionate words; he wants to help Mellie <span style="color: red;">[POW 5, longer sentence; shorter sentence].</span> Finally, towards the end of the school
year, Mellie begins to take an active part in her own life. First, Mellie starts trying harder in
her classes; second, she warns Rachel and other girls about how dangerous Andy
is; third, she stops Andy from assaulting her again; and fourth, she starts
talking to people again and telling the truth about the party <span style="color: red;">[POW 7, use of semicolon as a super comma].</span> I think that this novel is a great for
young adult readers BECAUSE it deals with real issues and emotions that young
people encounter <span style="color: red;">[POW 3, end a sentence with a “because”
clause].</span> </div>
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<span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;">When
I started reading “Dora Learns to Write and in the Process Encounters
Punctuation” I thought that the teacher was not being very constructive in
Dora’s grammatical education. As I continued to read on, I realized that
the teacher was actually being very helpful. AS SHE WRITES AND
PUNCTUATES, THE TEACHER ASKS DORA TO TALK THROUGH HER THOUGHT PROCESS </span><span style="color: red; font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family: "Segoe UI"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">[Sentence with compound verb, POW 2].</span><span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;"> By doing
this, the teacher better comprehends where Dora’s confusion comes from.
Young children often do not see the errors in their writing, so it is important
that the teacher is able to see how the children think as they write. DORA AND THE OTHER STUDENTS ARE ALSO TAUGHT BY EXAMPLE </span><span style="color: red; font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family: "Segoe UI"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">[Sentence with compound subject, POW 2].</span><span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;"> The teacher shows DORA AND THE CLASS books so
that they can SHE AND THEY can see correct uses of periods and punctuation </span><span style="color: red; font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family: "Segoe UI"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">[Compounded direct object with two personal pronouns, POW
3]. </span><span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;"> When Dora is confused about the
“dots” in her sentences and words, the teacher shows her the differences
between her use of them and the use of them in the books. Although it is
hard to teach grammar by example because it differs depending on the context,
using examples to teach how periods end sentences is a good idea. <u>She
is also supportive with the students’ work</u>. THE TEACHER SUPPORTS HER STUDENTS AS THEY BEGIN TO
UNDERSTAND PUNCTUATION </span><span style="color: red; font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family: "Segoe UI"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">[Revised
S-V-O to make stronger transitive verb, POW 1].</span><span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;"> She
understands that the learning process is slow, but she still encourages Dora
when she sees that she understands even the smallest concept a little bit
better. She is very helpful and
supportive of DORA, WHO shows signs of improvement throughout the article </span><span style="color: red; font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family: "Segoe UI"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">[Use of <i>who</i>,
POW 4].<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;">I
think that the teacher does do a good job overall, especially considering how
difficult it is to teach grammatical concepts to such young children. Dora
and her classmates, ALL OF WHOM look to their teacher for guidance, seem to
steadily improve throughout the article </span><span style="color: red; font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family: "Segoe UI"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">[Use
of <i>whom</i>, POW 4].</span><span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;"> The
teacher does a good job when she’s physically working with Dora, I think that
Dora gets confused when the teacher gives her directions and sends her to do
her own to work. When the teacher asked Dora to read her work “the way it
was meant to be” and to “stop at all the periods,” Dora appeared confused
(Cordeiro, 63). The directions are contradictory to her because she had
been told that she also needed to drop her voice at the end of her
sentences. I, personally, do not think that the teacher should have told
her to drop her voice because this shifts Dora’s focus too much on her voice
rather than the content. Due to her teacher’s contradictory directions, Dora
feels that she is forced to “choose between attending to her punctuating marks
or reading with meaning” (Cordeiro, 64). Cordeiro does say, “in early
writing experiences the child is often faced with abandoning an alternative
hypothesis which seems valid” (Cordeiro, 65). So, while it is not
uncommon that Dora feels she must abandon her way of thinking, she should not
be getting too many confusing directions from her teacher.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;">The
article makes it clear that Dora struggles with the use of periods. I
think that part of the reason that she has such a difficult time with this is
because she is still learning the correct usage of the punctuation mark.
Originally, DORA AND HER CLASSMATES THOUGHT THAT SHE AND THEY should use the
“dots” to signify the end of each word </span><span style="color: red; font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family: "Segoe UI"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">[Compounded
subject with two or more personal pronouns, POW 3].</span><span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;"> Dora and her classmates practiced doing this for
a while because it made sense to them. However, THROUGHOUT THE TEACHER’S
LESSONS AND EXAMPLES, SHE AND THEY began to recognize their errors </span><span style="color: red; font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%; mso-ascii-theme-font: minor-latin; mso-bidi-font-family: "Segoe UI"; mso-bidi-font-size: 10.5pt; mso-hansi-theme-font: minor-latin;">[Compounded object of preposition with two personal
pronouns, POW 3].</span><span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;"> After Dora looks at a book, she
realizes that there are not “dots” or periods between every word.
However, it is difficult for her to understand why the periods went where they
did because she often reads her stories differently than a mature writer would
read them. To her, it makes sense that fragments could be considered
sentences because this is simply how she reads at this stage in her life.
The concept of reading with the punctuation marks is hard for Dora. She
especially struggles with her use of the period because she does not
necessarily understand its function or use in different sentences. However, she makes progress after each
meeting with her teacher; she just needs more practice.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;"> When
I started reading “Dora Learns to Write and in the Process Encounters
Punctuation” I thought that the teacher was not being very constructive in
Dora’s grammatical education. As I continued to read on, I realized that
the teacher was actually being helpful. The teacher asks Dora to talk
through her rationale and thought process when she writes and punctuates.
By doing this, she is able to better understand from where Dora’s confusion
comes. Young children often do not see the errors in THEIR writing, so it
is important that the teacher is able to see how the children think as they
write [use of the pronoun their]. The teacher also teaches Dora by
example. She shows the class books so that they can look at examples of
sentences and punctuation. When Dora is confused about the “dots” in her
sentences and words, the teacher shows her the differences between her use of
them and the use of them in the books. Although it is hard to teach
grammar by example because it differs depending on the context, using examples
to teach how periods end sentences is a good idea. She is also supportive
with the STUDENTS’ work [I put an apostrophe after the s here]. She
understands that the learning process is slow, but she still encourages Dora
when she sees that she understands even the smallest concept a little bit
better. She is very helpful and
supportive of her students WHOSE writing shows slow signs of improvement [use
of the pronoun whose].<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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<span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;"> I think that the teacher does
do a good job overall, especially considering how difficult it is to teach
grammatical concepts to such young children. While she does a good job
when she’s physically working with Dora, I think that Dora gets confused when
the teacher gives her directions and sends her to do her own to work.
When the teacher asked Dora to read her work “the way it was meant to be” and
to “stop at all the periods,” Dora was confused (Cordeiro, 63). The
directions are contradictory to her because she had been told that she also
needed to drop her voice at the end of her sentences. I, personally, do
not think that the teacher should have told her to drop her voice because this
causes Dora to focus too much on her voice rather than the content. Due to her
teacher’s contradictory directions, Dora feels that she is forced to “choose
between attending to her punctuating marks or reading with meaning” (Cordeiro,
64). Cordeiro does say, “in early writing experiences the child is often
faced with abandoning an alternative hypothesis which seems valid” (Cordeiro,
65). So, while it is not uncommon that Dora feels she must abandon her
way of thinking, she should not be getting too many confusing directions from
her teacher.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
<div class="ecxmsonormal" style="background: white; line-height: 200%;">
<span style="font-family: Cambria; line-height: 200%;"> The article makes it clear
that Dora struggles with the use of periods. I think that part of the
reason that she has such a difficult time with this is because she is still
learning the correct usage of the punctuation mark. Originally, she was
told by her friends to use the “dots” to signify the end of each word.
She practiced doing this for a while because it made sense to her. After
she looks at a book, she realizes that there are not “dots” or periods between
every word. However, it is difficult for her to understand why the
periods went where they did because she often reads her stories differently
than a mature writer would read them. To her, it makes sense that
fragments could be considered sentences because this is simply how she reads at
this stage in her life. The concept of reading with the punctuation marks
is hard for Dora. She especially struggles with her use of the period
because she does not necessarily understand ITS function or use in different
sentences [use of the pronoun its].
However, she makes progress after each meeting with her teacher; she
just needs more practice.<o:p></o:p></span></div>
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Though I have always known that I wanted to teach high
school-level English, it constantly slips my mind that this will include
teaching grammar and the logistics of the English language. I love READING AND WRITING ESSAYS AND
ALL OF THE TYPICAL ASSIGNMENTS that you would associate with teaching high
school English [series of verbs connected with <i>and</i> no commas]. Even with a mother who is an English
major and a harsh grammar critic, I find myself struggling with my punctuation
often. </div>
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<br /></div>
<div class="MsoNormal">
Throughout high school, my teachers critiqued my use of
commas. Sadly, I am not even
consistent in my misuse of commas.
Sometimes I use them too often, and sometimes I forget to use them when
needed. I will occasionally combine
two sentences with a comma when they should be two separate sentences. I believe that this is called a comma
splice. I have greatly improved on
this over the years, but by the end of this course, I hope that I am able to
make few to zero mistakes when it comes to my use of commas.</div>
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<br /></div>
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Examples: </div>
<div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="margin-left: 1.0in; mso-add-space: auto; mso-list: l1 level1 lfo1; text-indent: -.25in;">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="font-family: Symbol; mso-bidi-font-family: Symbol; mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;">·<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman'; font-size: 7pt;">
</span></span><!--[endif]-->Sometimes I use them too often and sometimes I
forget them when they are needed.</div>
<div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 1.0in; mso-add-space: auto; mso-list: l1 level1 lfo1; text-indent: -.25in;">
<!--[if !supportLists]--><span style="font-family: Symbol; mso-bidi-font-family: Symbol; mso-fareast-font-family: Symbol;">·<span style="font-family: 'Times New Roman'; font-size: 7pt;">
</span></span><!--[endif]-->I went to the movie, a lot of my friends were
there.</div>
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</div>
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<br /></div>
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While doing some self-reflection during this blog post, I
have come to a conclusion: I am scared to use semicolons and colons. As I look back through previous
assignments, I find very few instances in which I used either of these
marks. Furthermore, I do not feel
that I completely and comprehensively understand all of the differences between
the two. I have a better understanding
of when to use colons, but I have only really used them for lists. I need to master these two marks and
learn to correctly apply them to my writing. I want to play with the way I punctuate my sentences more
often, including using colons and semicolons. Below is an examples of how I would use colons when writing
lists.</div>
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<br /></div>
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Example:</div>
<div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpFirst" style="margin-left: 1.0in; mso-add-space: auto; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo2; text-indent: -.25in;">
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</span></span><!--[endif]-->I love all of the seasons: WINTER, SPRING,
SUMMER, FALL [series of nouns connected with commas and no <i>and</i>’s] </div>
<div class="MsoListParagraphCxSpLast" style="margin-left: 1.0in; mso-add-space: auto; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo2; text-indent: -.25in;">
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</span></span><!--[endif]--><o:p> </o:p></div>
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Below is an example of how I believe a semicolon is used,
but I am not completely sure.</div>
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<br />
Example:</div>
<div class="MsoListParagraph" style="margin-left: 1.0in; mso-add-space: auto; mso-list: l0 level1 lfo2; text-indent: -.25in;">
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</span></span><!--[endif]-->Hitler was a monster; he was worse than any fictions
villain.</div>
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